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I'm anti-Green Day, but I won't lynch you! Never fear... I like all the lyrics by Otep... They are all poetic and beautiful. Especially the songs "Nein" and "Suicide trees". ...

If I knew the YWS people better, i'm sure this would be funny to me. Great job! In the end you said "Eight new reviews" instead of "Eight reviews by ...

Cool, not the best, I wake up another day Put on another face Tears gone today Try to keep on going Reasons ever going The rhyming sceme in these five ...

LOL, hilarious! Looks fine to me...

I blinked awkwardly. "BY GOLLY!" I exclaimed with delight. "THE MOON IS MADE OF CHEESE! I was wrong all along. And... IT'S SWISS! Anyone got any bread? Or crackers?" Then ...

"YES!" I yell, some soggy cheddar falling out of my mouth. "TO THE MOOOOON! We can be the first internet writing board to ever visit it!"

I sniff the hunk of cheese. "Hm.... Are you sure? Because this, it's more of a.... white cheddar cheese." I take another bite. "Yes, definetly cheddar." I break of some ...

"The moon is not made of cheese. The moon is made of rock." I tell Duskglimmer loudly. "I think. Actually, i'm not quite sure where I got this... So it's ...

And I, meanwhile, just kind of stand around and eat some cheese I found. Somewhere...

Eheheh, I meant you can't critque this in anyway you choose and you will never insult me... See, my feelings all died a while ago >.< I wrote this like ...

It probably won't make much sense to you. Again, not about suicide. It's not a goodbye, more of a memories. If you care enough to ask, I will gladly explain. ...

I wrote this poem. It's not about suicide, it's a different kind of goodbye. Insult this, rip it to shreads, don't read it... Feel free to do whatever you choose ...

These are really beautiful lyrics. The name could be chnaged, because it seems... kind of plain, compared to the rest of the lyrics. "Let’s pick at the scabs, From the ...

WOW, I think this is ABSOLUETLY WONDERFUL! I think that you could add the name Dani in a little more, so readers won't be like, "Dani who?" Also, best friend ...

HILARIOUS AND RANDOM! I like it. One thing... Turns out, he could stand the force of a piano being dropped on him. What a weakling. I think you mean "couldn't"...